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Jack

100 word stories. Post all you like, maybe we'll dip in and use yours?

Jack

Postby ROU Killing Time on Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:45 am

I lay in deathly sleep.

The cold, sharp edge of the blade opens me, awakening me from my sweet slumber.

My skull carved open, brains scooped out and discarded as useless trash.

I would scream, but have no mouth for my agonies to issue forth from.

Not yet, anyway.

My simple, smooth face is next.

Ragged holes for eyes, and now a jagged mouth, teeth bared and hungry.

Then, a burning within.

I stare with gooey, gleaming sight at my tormentor, then feast and satisfy my new, eternal hunger.

In the compost pile, my children germinate and begin to grow.
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Re: Jack

Postby Mr. Tweedy on Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:27 am

He he he.

It's a "Pumpkin Seeds" prequel.
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Re: Jack

Postby ROU Killing Time on Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:30 am

Mr. Tweedy wrote:He he he.

It's a "Pumpkin Seeds" prequel.

What episode # is that. I think it might be in that small block I've missed from going backwards and forwards, but never quite meeting in the middle.
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Re: Jack

Postby Mr. Tweedy on Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:32 am

#36 - It's a classic.
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Re: Jack

Postby Phenopath on Sat Oct 31, 2009 8:40 am

I like it a lot, simple yet effective.

My only question, why was the pumpkin's sleep deathly?
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Re: Jack

Postby ROU Killing Time on Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:06 am

Phenopath wrote:I like it a lot, simple yet effective.

My only question, why was the pumpkin's sleep deathly?

See how you feel after someone yanks you from your vine...
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Re: Jack

Postby eric_marsh on Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:24 pm

I great tale for Samhain
Life is a tragedy for those who feel, but a comedy to those who think. - Horace Walpole
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Re: Jack

Postby tbaker2500 on Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:35 pm

Dude! How could you have missed Pumpkin Seeds? Have you never listened to my Top Ten? :-)
Glad to see you writing again.
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