by Mr. Tweedy on Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:27 pm
The story was conceptually interesting and exceptionally well-produced (awesome music selection), but I can't escape the feeling that it just didn't go anywhere. We were introduced to several subplots, but none of them were developed. How will the wife's "ghosting" effect her? The relationship? Will the husband join her? Is the uploaded teenager really changing? If so, why? How will events end up effecting the religious views of the various parties? The setup was brilliant: It had me holding breath, figuratively white-knuckled, waiting for the end... And then the end went by without my really marking it, leaving my breath held, which is very uncomfortable. It's great to leave questions unanswered, but I felt like this story left ALL the questions unanswered, which didn't really satisfy me.
I think part of my problem is that this story was so very, very similar to John Crowley's story "Snow." It had almost exactly the same premise (people are backed up and stored on a computer, where relatives can go visit; existential questions arise), but Snow, while it also left most of its questions unanswered, had a distinctly creepy something is wrong with the world vibe that made it more satisfying. When I finished it, I felt like reality was a thin facade over something horrible. I didn't have much idea what was back there, but it was something to take home with me.
I guess I feel that the author's neutrality hurt the story. The author needed to take a stand: "This is a good idea" or "This is a bad idea." Without that, you don't really have story, just a description. That's what I feel like this was: A creative and interesting description. I enjoyed listening to it, but it hasn't got any meat. A delicious side dish in need of a main course.
As to the idea of something like this being plausible, there are two questions that strike me: "Can you pause a mind?" and "Is a mind port-able?" It seems inevitable that we will soon have computers with the raw processing power of brains (technology catches up with biology), but that will not mean that a mind can "run" on that computer. The brain is a custom processor and the software is made to run on it. Can minds be ported over to run on a different system or are they "written" is such a way the only brains can process them? In that case, would you have actually simulate a brain, run a virtual machine? And, assuming you actually could create a computer on which a mind could "run," how would you get the mind in there? And inherent quality of life is continual change (animation). Your mind is not a static thing: It is a sequence of events. Your mind is happening. If you make a copy, it seems that you must necessarily stop the mind and restart it at a later time. Can you do that? Might there be side effects?
Which are some of the questions I wish the story would have dealt with.